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Mitzy buff and beautiful

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oh how mitzy has changed. i think she looks much better in anthro style dont you... anyway insekid races are notorious for being able to develop muscule mass much faster than any mammal. mitzy is the second physically strongest on the team with dragina being the first.


would you say my anatomy and coloring improved?
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

It has been a long while since I wrote a critique but you can start again anytime, right?

I hope you find my critique useful for your next drawings, I can see you have a lot of skills. So let's get this started:

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> The Good <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblue:" title="Bullet; Blue"/> What caught my attention first in both drawings was the anthro style you used, you've finally developed your own anthro style and now you can draw your characters on this style. That has to be a big improvement for an artist like you. Well done!

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> I loved the expression you gave to Missy in this drawing, it fits very well to her personality and the situation, very nicely done.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletgreen:" title="Bullet; Green"/> The body proportions as well as the coloring are well done too; the way you can draw now muscle mass and anatomy is great and I can only tell you to keep drawing more to keep improving on both, specially your coloring.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/> The Bad <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletred:" title="Bullet; Red"/>

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> One of the things that I don't like about this drawing is the way you drew Mitzy's tail. It might be only me but I think she'd look better if it was a bit thinner and no so thick. Again, that's my opinion.

<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt=":bulletblack:" title="Bullet; Black"/> I know how hard drawing hands can be and that might be the reason why you drew only one so I hope to see you drawing more hands in your next drawings, you have the skills to do it and make them look better than in this pic because I think it looks too big and it doesn't look to natural for me. Either way, you only need some practice and you'll fix this without problem.

Anyhow, keep up the good work because you're improving at every drawing you show us. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt=":thumbsup:" title="Thumbs Up"/>